im likin this
pretty good
this beat is unheard of
pretty good
check out my shit
im likin this
pretty good
this beat is unheard of
pretty good
check out my shit
this is pretty good
im not a fan of the whole
gangsta thang
but you guys pull off
you don't sound like a lot of fake ass white boyz
i like it
maybe try working on the quality a little
pretty good beat too
hmmm
i don't see how this beat Casey
now, im slightly biased
but, his flow was a LIL better
his lyrics were a lot better
and his hook was strong
but, his beat wasn't his
and you made this
yours is a bit angrier
which helps in a battle
but i honestly think he won
hmmm
I've heard of you...
do you know of a "Casey Jones"
anyways, im not going to vote on this, because
of my voting disposition, it would lower it
even if i gave a 4
anyways
its decent, but it could use some fill
i understand it took a tiny bit of time
anyways, i like some of your other stuff
but...not so much the Casey Jones diss,
that would be one of my people
anyways
the beat is pretty good, sorry for rambling
its all good i just battled em to battle em
well
this is pretty damn good
but i kept waiting for it to drop into some kind of awesome beat
i think with drums this will be quite amazing
oh yeah.Definately with drums.I practiced out drums and created my first awesome beat.Check it out,its call Clubcruiser.Way better than this!
well
the rapper is a lil off his flow, the hook is a lil weak, take all the dubbing of the verse
and add some to the hook, the second rapper is a lil better, and the beat is golden
if you do the right things this track would be a fire starter
The artist requested the hook mix with single vocal. The final mix has a stronger hook volume. As for being off flow, this was re-recorded until it was on-time except for small intentional discrepancies and it was comped and time adjusted by hand to keep the doubles aligned as well. I spent alot of time locking the verses into step with the beat. Thanks for the review.
Peace
well, feedback...
this is a good start, i would re record it without the auto tune(not because i think its played out, i belive its in the wrong tune) the rappers lyrics need work, the best line i heard was the "sinner, hit her" one. The voices are a lil weak, im sorry, stick with that producer, for sure. so i guess, work a lil on lyrics, use rhyming dictionaries if you must. train your voices, and try and be clearer
3:33!half evil
this is decent
the singer is great, and would probably sound better without auto tune
the first rapper is got nice lyrics and a decent voice, but his flow sounds a little forced. the second guy, is it the same guy? i cant tell. but if it is his lyrics are not as good as the first one
anyways, the beat is okay
but there is a little too much going on
nice job tho
hey, thanks for the review! thanks for the compliment on my singing, and yes, we are doing tracks without auto-tune at the moment, which should be up this weekend! also, about the rapping, it's the same person all the way through. i personally think all the verses are MADDDDD good, but ur opinion will be considered. also, about the beat, i like things to be really busy in a song, just my preference, and this is a get-up-and-go kinda song, haha.
PCE!
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