alright
on this track
I'm going to forget that YOU
called ME fake
the beat is good, obviously, its a kid cudi beat
the lyrics are relativly decent
the flow is the same you use on all your tracks
now, I understand the point of a mixtape track
is to come up with a new way to do the song
but you are spitting gutta lyrics over a stoner beat
it doesn't work to well
also, you sound like you are whispering
almost like your rapping late at night...
in your mothers basement...
hmmm?
also, back to how real you are
you probably live in the sub-urban areas
or in the more rural areas
you dont have whips
and you dont have guns
I'd like to see you run thru a real hood
rappin about n***as and choppas
so, overall
work on originality, you know? not the same thing over and over
then work on lyrics, they are decent, but could be better
then switch up the flow a little
3:33 Half Evil